After reading my first draft, Simon has decided that Molly should be taken out of the script, as he feels that this will take me over the three minutes. Reluctantly I have agreed, and can see that it would be better to film a smaller amount, in order to give me room to experiment with performance and not be restricted in the edit. So after revisions, and a slight change to action directions here is my second draft:
Tuesday 27 September 2011
Direction Unit - Second Draft
Decisions, decisions, decisions
After reading my first draft, Simon has decided that Molly should be taken out of the script, as he feels that this will take me over the three minutes. Reluctantly I have agreed, and can see that it would be better to film a smaller amount, in order to give me room to experiment with performance and not be restricted in the edit. So after revisions, and a slight change to action directions here is my second draft:
Sherlock Screenplay Draft 2
After reading my first draft, Simon has decided that Molly should be taken out of the script, as he feels that this will take me over the three minutes. Reluctantly I have agreed, and can see that it would be better to film a smaller amount, in order to give me room to experiment with performance and not be restricted in the edit. So after revisions, and a slight change to action directions here is my second draft:
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