Wednesday, 19 October 2011

Direction - Editing

It's not over till it's over!

I have made a few changes during the edit process. Before and during the shoot, I worked really hard to get the sharpest HD picture possible, with no gain. But, piecing it all together, it just doesn't go with the story and setting. I wanted this to be a gritty piece, so why should the quality of the film be pristine? Therefore I have added a slight amount of gain in Post Production.  I have found editing the sound EXTREMELY difficult, and I fear this is going to bring my mark down :( I wish I had had the incredibly useful lecture with the sound recordist before my shoot!! I think I went wrong with the boom, I left it above the actors in the centre, and did not ask my boom operator to move to each actor when they spoke. I have saved some from the use of the second directional mic which was used next to Watson, so his lines are A LOT clearer, but it notices in difference with the other two actors. Oh well you learn from your mistakes.

So far I am REALLY enjoying the editing, I even came into the studios at 7am and left at 6pm two days running! That's quite an early start for me :) I have just added some music to the film and the Sherlock theme at the end, and I must say, it makes me smile every time I play the ending now! Anyway enough rambling, more editing!

DIRECTION - POST PRODUCTION

It's a Wrap!! 
I filmed my drama piece on Monday, at Drakes, and I am very pleased with the majority of the footage. The sound is VERY difficult to smooth out, as there is a great difference between the two mics, but I will try my best :) We shot everything I planned to, and some extra, which was great!! I was very impressed with my actors, crew and my DOP Lauren W. I think we all worked really well together, and the cast gave a good performance, the rehearsals made a difference for sure! The lighting was the hardest thing to get right, it took us two hours at least to try and get it close to perfect, but I wasn't completely happy with it, as I hadn't been able to practice with them on location. However, as I have begun to edit, there isn't to much of problem with the continuity of lighting.


Here are a few stills from the shoot:














Friday, 14 October 2011

Direction Unit - Working as DOP on Lauren W's Shoot

Wow what a fantastic night! Myself and Lauren really enjoyed ourselves! The actors were fantastic, and it was amazing to be a part of!


I acted as Lauren's DOP, she had worked out what shot's she wanted, but also allowed me to have artistic imput, which was really rewarding, thanks Lauren! I think we got some great shots, and I really enjoyed playing around with the camera settings/ focus/ shutter speed etc, to get some really unusual shots. The Lighting we used was ALL practical, but where we placed it in the frame, and how it lit our actors, worked extremely well. Working with Lauren has really furthered my interest of working with camera's, she has really helped me to see different ways of making the images look really stunning, especially the use of different lenses!


We also worked together on filming a music showcase at the Hazllit Theatre on Weds. We had a chat about what type of shots we wanted, and who was going to cover what. Using the correct shutter speed for the lighting conditions, and again using the wide lense, the outcome has been FANTASTIC! I don't mean to big ourselves up, but the quality of the recording is really good, and looks really professional, and it's al down to getting used to playing around with the camera settings, it can make things so much better! Hopefully we will be able to post it on Youtube, but it depends on the artists, in the mean time if you get a chance ask Lauren to look at it whilst it's being edited :)


Here's some of the Shots I got on Lauren's Shoot :) ( Hope she doesn't mine me stealing them!! )
























Direction Unit - Shot List



Direction Shot List – Sherlock - 9pm Call Time - Drakes, Maidstone.

Scene 1
Watson walking to Drakes.

  1. Long Shot – Low angle, Watson in the shadows walking down the subway, left of frame
  2. Low angle, dutch tilt, of Watson walking towards us through the Subway.
  3. Low Angle of  following Watson’s shadow, as he walks beside him.
  4. Tracking shot of Watson’s feet and cane.
  5. Medium Shot, Watson left of frame, now closer to us.
  6. swalks towards Drakes.
  7. Establishing Wide Shot, pulled into focus, of Drakes.
  8. Medium Shot, over the shoulder of Watson entering Drakes.

Scene 2
The Poker Game

  1. Over the Shoulder – Watson entering the Pub, Sherlock in the background at the bar, buying two whiskeys for him and mike.
  2. Wide –  Watson Entering the scene
  3. Wide – Three Shot of WHOLE scene
  4. Medium – on WATSON of WHOLE scene
  5. Medium – on SHERLOCK of WHOLE scene
  6. Close up – on WATSON of WHOLE scene
  7. Close up – on SHERLOCK of WHOLE scene
  8. Dirty Single over WATSON’s chair/ shoulder – on MIKE of WATSON entering and WHOLE SCENE
  9. Dirty Single – over SHERLOCK’s shoulder – on WATSON, as he gives the phone, pull focus on WATSON as SHERLOCK asks “ Afganistan or Iraq?”
  10. VERY SLOW ZOOM OUT/ DOLLY OUT - on WATSON, as SHERLOCK delivers his monologue.
  11. VERY SLOW ZOOM IN /DOLLY IN – on SHERLOCK, as he says his monologue.
  12. ECU – on SHERLOCK’s eyes, as he begins to type on phone. (Phone should be covering his mouth/nose)
  13. PAN UP / JIB MOVEMENT – from the floor on WATSON, up past his cane, and finishing on the poker cards.
  14. SLOW TRACK AROUND TABLE – from WATSON, around to SHERLOCK, as SHERLOCK says his monologue.
  15. CU – SHERLOCK’s hands collecting the winnings.
  16. ECU – on SHERLOCK’s cards – a PAIR OF ACES
  17. CU – on the hand of cards on the table ( Three kings, a nine and a ten)
  18. CU’s – of SHERLOCK Smoking
  19. CU’s – MIKE smoking
  20. CU’s – WATSON smoking
  21. CU’s SHERLOCK drinking
  22. CU’s MIKE drinking
  23. CU’s WATSON drinking.
  24. Various CU of cards being played- at least five


Tuesday, 11 October 2011

Direction Unit - Rehearsals!

To Be Or Not To Be, That Is The Question.

It's been an interesting week in my household, as we have began the rehearsals! We started off, acting in different ways, in order to get everyone relaxed. The actors almost know all their lines, and we have began blocking out. The next thing will be figuring out the poker game, and how it will play out, which is going to be tricky!! I have booked the lights, and the location is ready for either Sunday 16th or Monday 17th. I'm getting excited now!!

Here's a few shots from last nights rehearsal:












Wednesday, 5 October 2011

Commission- Research

5/10/11 - Chav The Origin

Where did the word Chav originate?


I am trying to uncover the true origin of the word Chav, it's place in the English language and the Oxford Dictionary. It would seem Jo has excitingly found someone form The University of Kent, that has written a lot on the word, and are looking forward to talking to them in the future. 


I have found a language expert Professor David Crystal. His email is davidcrystal1@googlemail.com, and he seems like  nice man, so I will be emailing him to see whether he would like to appear in our documentary, depending on his schedule and where he is in the country. In the mean time, here is what he has said on the word Chav :
"Chav. It came to the fore as a word in 2005 really, I didn't remember hearing it much before that. It refers to a type of youth, supposedly uncultured, maybe a bit anti-social, perhaps even violent, but certainly marked out, at least from the point of view of the critic, by very bad taste. Chavs are supposed to wear a lot of flashy jewellery, white trainers, baseball caps, sham designer clothes. Girls expose a lot of midriff. Nothing racial about it all, I should say. 

Now, whether it's cool or not to be a chav, I couldn't say - at least, not at my age! I find the linguistics much more interesting. It's a problem though, the linguistics. Where does the word come from? It's been around since the 19th century. Lexicographer Eric Partridge mentions it in his huge dictionary of slang and unconventional English. He talks about it coming from Romany (the language of the gypsies), 'chavy' - a child, or 'chaval' - a boy. And then later it was used for 'men' as well. 

But nobody knows who's reactivated it in recent times. It's a noun, 'a chav', 'chavs', and also an adjective - people talk about 'chav behaviour' or 'chav insults' and that sort of thing. Oh, don't believe the popular etymologies that you read sometimes in the press and on websites. I saw one the other day, people said, 'It's an acronym, 'chav', from council house and violent' - well, no, it isn't, that was made up in recent times. Appealing as these etymologies are, they're nothing to do with the real Romany history of this very interesting word."


He also talked about hoodies a few years ago:
"There was a newspaper headline in the middle of last year, 'Hoodie Hoodlums' it said. It referred to people who were going around looking like gangs wearing hooded tops, baseball caps, clothing which deliberately obscured the face, suggesting that the wearer might be a danger to the public, so much so that baseball caps and hooded tops were actually banned in 2005 at one shopping mall in Britain. Well, as you might expect, it caused a huge reaction. I mean, youngsters complaining of being stereotyped just because of a few nasty people.

The linguistics isn't so controversial. The spelling first of all, 'hoody', or 'hoodie', and more often with the 'ie' than not. And that's because it's the usual familiarity marker that you get on lots of words in English, words like, sweetie, auntie, goalie (goal keeper), daddie and mummie, and of course in names too, Susie (Susan).

Well, will it catch on? I think so, judging by the huge sales of hoodies now. And also, it's achieved a kind of presence in popular music. There was a single released towards the end of 2005 by Lady Sovereign, it was actually called 'Hoodie'. And then on the web the other day, I was looking at iPods, and the latest accessory to keep your iPod clothed - what do you think it's called? An iPod hoodie! "



I have now sent Bluewater four emails, and have still not had a reply, I sent one to the manager today, so hopefully I will get an answer one way or another soon!


I have also managed to gather all the archive footage I think we will like to use, and have started to edit bits and pieces together in Final Cut Pro, so I think our documentary is now off the ground and on it's way!!! 


Now onto ASDA!

Commission Unit: Project Update

And So It Begins!
These are our current plans for the next few weeks, hopefully. Fingers crossed all our contributors confirm their input soon! Obviously we will be adding more meetings/filming days to this as time goes on.

DatePlan
Thurs 6.10Work on draft script
Thurs 13.10Complete draft script
Thurs 20.10Make detailed plans for sequences
Thurs 27.10Make detailed plans for interviews
Tues 1.11Finalise script
Wed 2.11Finalise script
Tues 8.11Contributor interview
Thurs 10.11Filming in London
Mon 14.11Contributor interview
Tues 15.11Filming in Maidstone/Chatham
Thurs 17.11Contributor interview
Fri 18.11Filming in Bluewater

Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Direction Unit - Script Breakdown

It's All In The Planning!
At the moment I'm trying to organise exactly what I need for my shoot, so here is my Script Breakdown!

Props:
A Round Table and Three Chairs
A Walking Cane for Watson
A Deck of Playing Cards
Poker Chips
Cigarettes, Lighter and Ashtray
Watson's Mobile Phone
Whiskey Glass and Two Beer Bottles
Cash Notes for the Pot

Locations:
At the moment I am currently pursuing permission to film in either The Drakes pub, in the centre of Maidstone by the river, or a smaller pub called The Fox, on Tunbridge Road. 




Crew:
Camera: Dan 
Sound/ Camera: Lauren W
Lighting: Fran

Production Design
I want the Pub to have a grimy feel, low lighting, like an underground poker club. With low ceilings and wooden floors. I want the pub to be empty, as though this is a secret thing that is occurring. 

Costume:
All three characters will be in shirts and ties. Sherlock stands out as being very stylish, grey suit and slicked back hair. Very fitted, with shiny black shoes. 

Equipment:
I will be using the SONY PMW EX1R, Boom mic,  a three point lighting kit and a reflector.

Budget:
My budget is currently zero, but I will help with expenses and will purchase props and drinks out of my own money. 

Cast
                                                          
SHERLOCK
MIKE
WATSON




Schedule
Im going to do a night shoot, that will last approx two hours. This is so the location I use can clear of public customers. My call time will therefore be 11pm. I am awaiting to schedule an exact date.

A shot list will follow soon.

Comissions Unit - The Final Pitch

Just delivered my final pitch, here it is!!!




Don’t Call Me Chav The
Pitch
This documentary is an investigation of the rise of the CHAVS the 00’s, that is 
continuing into the 21st century. Mass hysteria due to their criminal stereotype, has lead to a form of segregation between us and them, from banning their style of clothing from large shopping centre’s to humiliating references in today’s popular culture, i.e. Vicky Pollard. The labeling of the majority of Britain’s underclass as CHAVs, has become almost a form of social racism and acceptable snobbery. I want to show how these attitudes widens the class divide, in the 21st century, and how we have allowed it, focusing on the story of PHIL COLE. He has been labeled a CHAV, from a very young age, due to the clothes he wears and the music he listens to. Shop owners, nightclub bouncers and restaurants, simply because of the way he looks, refuse him entry. I will tell the story from his point of view, looking at the friends he hangs around with, what they get up to, their style and tastes, as well as the family he was raised in and societies perception of him. I will also use a presenter to help lead the investigation. The presenter will be quirky and go on a journey of self-discovery, where his ideas will be challenged. Think Louis Theroux, meets MY BIG FAT CHAV ESTATE.
 





I hope the Pitch went ok, I seemed to get positive feedback. Simon mentioned that the presenter wouldn't really work, and I totally agree, so I am going to scrap that if my documentary is commissioned. I'll let you know the decision I get this afternoon!

Direction Unit - Second Draft

Decisions, decisions, decisions
After reading my first draft, Simon has decided that Molly should be taken out of the script, as he feels that this will take me over the three minutes. Reluctantly I have agreed, and can see that it would be better to film a smaller amount, in order to give me room to experiment with performance and not be restricted in the edit. So after revisions, and a slight change to action directions here is my second draft: 


Sherlock Screenplay Draft 2

Thursday, 22 September 2011

Direction Unit - The Script

The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword


I have now completed my first draft of my adapted screenplay. Although the main text is four pages long, the scene I have chosen, on transmission, was only 3 minutes. I intend to shoot all of the screenplay I have drawn up, and edit it down to three minutes in post-production, as I believe this is what the orginal series has done, especially as Sherlock speaks with great speed! Anyway let me know what you think!


Sherlock - A study in pink - The scene where Sherlock first meets Watson, now set in a Pub, during a very late night poker game. 


Sherlock Screenplay First Draft

Direction Unit - The Opening title sequence

It's a wrap!!


Dan has VERY kindly edited together our title sequence, and it looks great! I love the oceans 13 theme track, and all the voiceover which gets the audience in the mood so to speak! If you haven't seen it yet, here it is:

Comission Unit - The Pitch

Chavs: Segregation in the noughties
Pitch

This documentary is an investigation of rise and segregation of CHAVS during the 00’s, that is continuing into the 21st century. The labeling of the majority of Britain’s underclass as CHAVs, has become almost a form of social racism and acceptable snobbery. I want to show how this segregation widens the class divide, in the 21st century, and how we have allowed it. Focusing on the story of PHIL COLE, who is labeled a chav by the society around him, due to the clothes he wears and the music he listens to, and is consequently refused entry by shop owners, nightclub bouncers and restaurants, simply because of the way he looks. I will tell the story from his point of view, following him in the style of cinema verite, looking at the friends he hangs around with, the family he was raised in and societies perception of him. 

Chavs: Segregation in the noughties
Pitch Script

Yesterday is part of the UKTV brand, a forward thinking media group, that appeals to ALL THINGS BRITISH, with channels such as Blighty, Dave and Gold. I think the idea of CHAV, is typically British, especially prominent in the last ten years, and would therefore be well placed on Yesterday, which has commissioned, in the past, programmes such as Pornography – The Secret History and Sex, Drugs and Rock n Roll in the 60’s.

The word Chav, is thought to have originated from Chatham, in particular the appearance of Chatham girls. However some argue it’s a extended use of the word Chavvy in the Romani Gypsy language, meaning youth.

The word Chav, has with out doubt turned into one of the most popular words of the Noughties. Susie Dent’s Larpers and Chroomers: The Language Report, published by The Oxford University Press, named it „The Word of the Year“, in 2004. I want to investigate where the word came from, Chav hysteria, the persecution of the hoodies and the point of view of those that are labeled with this now infamous stereotype.

Chavs: Segregation in the Noughties, will be an investigative documentary, exploring whether the term Chav is a justified label, or whether it is a loose term, thrown around in order to categories the under classes in society and is therefore used as a form of Social Racisms. I will also use cinema virite for elements of the documentary, when falling my central characters, letting their attitudes, opinions and actions tell the story.

I want to introduce the story through well known „chavs“ so people can immediately visualize the stereotype. I will therefore use clips from Little Britain’s Vicky Pollard, and The Catherine Tate’s Show’s Lauren.

The tension will come from the people who class these youths as Chavs, including industry giants and the media, and those that embrace the stereotype or oppose it.

Burberry suffered an identity crisis during the Rise of the Chavs. Their trade mark checkered tartan design became hugely popular with the Chavs in the early 00’s, mainly through counterfeit goods. I want to speak to someone from Burberry, and find out how this association affected their brand. Stacey Cartwright CEO of Burberry said „it was mainly counterfeit and Britain accounts for less than 10% of our sales“

My main character is Phil Cole, a boy that was brought up in a Christian Home, in Vinters park. Due to the music he listens to, the friends he hangs out with, the car he drives, the tattoos and the clothes he wears, he is often labeled a CHAV. During the Noughties, he was often drinking heavily, meddling with drugs, going to drum and base raves, and getting in trouble with the Law. Yet at the core, he is a sweet boy, with a steady girlfriend and now has a secure job. I want to see his friends, where they hang out and what they get up to.  I want them to show that although they fall into the stereotype, they are individuals, and resent the word CHAV, because they feel it is a term given to all those that come from Britain’s underclass.

Segregation is key to this documentary. By visually showing it’s existence, through sequences of the public staring at a group of Chavs, to shops displaying signs „NO ENTRY TO HOODIES or YOUTH WEARING CAPS. I would like to interview a shop owner that has this in their window, as well as Bluewater, who put a strict NO HOODIE policy throughout their shopping centre.

One sequence I would also like to use, would be to take a photo of Phil Cole to the high street, one in Maidstone and one in Chatham, and ask the public to tell me the label they would give him, just by looking at his photo. 

Throughout the documentary I want to use music from Goldie Looking Chain, as they are often seen as “taking the mick” out of Chavs‘ As well as Lasy Soveriegn and her song “hoodie”

This film should be commissioned, as there hasn’t been an insightful documentary into the word Chav, and how it affects society in terms of those who do the labeling and those that are branded with this derogative term.